八年级电影节终于开始了！今天只是电影节的第二天，但我们已经往里面投入了很多的心血。昨日已经把Story Board画完，今天就开始写剧本，试拍了！
以下是我们的大纲：
ACT 1:
The FIRST SCENE:
Close up of parent teaches the young child the piano, then change the scene to the parent and the child having breakfast. This is one of the repeating caring scenes (CS) the child is on their phone, not paying attention to the parent who is talking (silent). The child quickly rushes out of the home to go to school.
THE SECOND SCENE:
Happy quick cuts of the kid walking to school.
CLIMAX / PROBLEM 1:
Focus is on child raising their hand for a question, then rack focus to people in the background making fun of them. Tripping the child over, knocking books over the table.
ACT 2:
THE FIRST SCENE:
Caring scene at a different time of day (night time) to show time change, the child still ignores them on phone, the mum persists and tries talking to them, the child gets agitated and leaves the table. Slams the door to her room.
THE SECOND SCENE:
On laptop/phone, a message pops up, threatening and judgemental, something along the lines of ‘wow u did….’ ‘Ur fat’ etc.
CLIMAX / PROBLEM 2: The child becomes extremely sad, anxious, agitated. Rapid flash cuts.
MAIN CLIMAX: The child is so frustrated she starts leaning against the door while sitting on the floor, then cuts to a shot of two people on either side of a door, the mum leaning her head on the door and the daughter on the other side. The mother is trying to talk to the daughter but she isn’t responding. Cut to a close up of mums face, she turns around and starts walking, things get blurry to show dizziness, the mother starts falling, then a blackout. ‘911 what’s your emergency’.
ACT 3 ENDING: Grown-up child plays the piano with mother resting on the shoulder, this is the only scene with sound, after they finish, they stand up and the child holds the mother and helps her walk as we assume she has become blind, they both seem to be happy.
上面这些看起来有点乱，简单来说，我们的film的structure如下：
Piano Teaching
Caring at breakfast
✔️Bullying at school
Caring at dinner
Cyberbullying
Child getting frustrated
Mom and daughter on either side of doors
Mom collapse
Child playing piano with mum.
虽然目前只完成了一个，但质量还不错。希望大家能够再接再厉！
最后附一个大家假装在认真读书的片段：
ACT 1:
The FIRST SCENE:
Close up of parent teaches the young child the piano, then change the scene to the parent and the child having breakfast. This is one of the repeating caring scenes (CS) the child is on their phone, not paying attention to the parent who is talking (silent). The child quickly rushes out of the home to go to school.
THE SECOND SCENE:
Happy quick cuts of the kid walking to school.
CLIMAX / PROBLEM 1:
Focus is on child raising their hand for a question, then rack focus to people in the background making fun of them. Tripping the child over, knocking books over the table.
ACT 2:
THE FIRST SCENE:
Caring scene at a different time of day (night time) to show time change, the child still ignores them on phone, the mum persists and tries talking to them, the child gets agitated and leaves the table. Slams the door to her room.
THE SECOND SCENE:
On laptop/phone, a message pops up, threatening and judgemental, something along the lines of ‘wow u did….’ ‘Ur fat’ etc.
CLIMAX / PROBLEM 2: The child becomes extremely sad, anxious, agitated. Rapid flash cuts.
MAIN CLIMAX: The child is so frustrated she starts leaning against the door while sitting on the floor, then cuts to a shot of two people on either side of a door, the mum leaning her head on the door and the daughter on the other side. The mother is trying to talk to the daughter but she isn’t responding. Cut to a close up of mums face, she turns around and starts walking, things get blurry to show dizziness, the mother starts falling, then a blackout. ‘911 what’s your emergency’.
ACT 3 ENDING: Grown-up child plays the piano with mother resting on the shoulder, this is the only scene with sound, after they finish, they stand up and the child holds the mother and helps her walk as we assume she has become blind, they both seem to be happy.
上面这些看起来有点乱，简单来说，我们的film的structure如下：
Piano Teaching
Caring at breakfast
✔️Bullying at school
Caring at dinner
Cyberbullying
Child getting frustrated
Mom and daughter on either side of doors
Mom collapse
Child playing piano with mum.
虽然目前只完成了一个，但质量还不错。希望大家能够再接再厉！
最后附一个大家假装在认真读书的片段：
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